Sunjung EDIT 6190 Fall Semester
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Grizzle, Haley

 

11/23/05

I just viewed your studio project and have some feedback. I realize you are
still working on this, but here's what I noticed this far:

1. The photo is missing from the home page
2. I like the graphics you’ve incorporated so far on your site. I can’t wait
to see what else you add to your project. Good luck.

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Chia-Ying Lin

 

12/1/05

here are some things I saw when I looked at it:
1. I still cannot see the picture on the welcome page (I
remember that's a flash, right?). Probably you need to figure
out how to fix it so that users can see it.
2. For me, the font size of the welcome words ("Hi, please
come on in") seems a little bit small. You might need to make
it bigger so that it will get the users attention (esp. the
kids) to know they can click there to go into your website.
3. In the welcome page, there is a little bird on the
airplane (actually I am not sure whether it is a bird or not
so I presume it is! :) ). I notice you add a link and think
if I click it, it would enter into your homepage. But in fact
it gets me nowhere. Probably you need to check it out and see
if you would like to revise or remove the link.

That's all I see for now. I know everything is still going on
but it is going great. I look forward to seeing your
finalized product.

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